Mariposa

Butterfly painted lady spread your wings Thighs of color pose your love I light candle flame for you I am consumed by fire Since my house has burned down I can see the moon more clearly I gaze upon your Eden falling upon me I run blindly to you as you mount flowers in my garden As I hold you in my arms do not let me feel your departure upon my hand...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2013 7:08:00 AM

Ken, your pen is beautiful. (heart) the exposure of healing is found through the imagery. somehow I feel this new passion burning deep inside you, is what you needed. but u know you can't keep a mariposa in your hands for that long. a beautiful gift of a poem. and PS... im from Texas. wink!. luv*Linda

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/2/2013 7:55:00 AM

Hola Paloma, Some say love is like a butterfly, if you chase it, it will run away..If you are patient it will stay in your hands,, Besos, Ken

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/1/2013 10:34:00 PM

Ken, your poetry is soft and lyric and replete with passion and longing. Beautiful. Thanks for your visits to my work!

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/1/2013 10:37:00 PM

Hi Eileen, Thank you for the kindest comments and for visiting tonight. regards, Ken

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/1/2013 4:49:00 PM

Welcome to ps..So.many romantic poems im reading today..A passionate post..Excellent!Charma

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/1/2013 4:51:00 PM

Hi Charma, Thank you for visiting my work and the lovely comment.. Ken

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/1/2013 3:51:00 PM

Ahh!! Romantic work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for your visits to my work..Sara

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/1/2013 3:53:00 PM

Hi Sara, Thank you for dropping by today... Regards, Ken

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/1/2013 12:19:00 PM

AMAZING WRITE MY FRIEND VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/1/2013 12:24:00 PM

Hi Liam, Thanks buddy for stopping by.. Your friend, Ken