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Lullaby

Goodnight and good sleep little one Off to bed, no tears to cry Dream your dreams until dawn sun This is an attempt at lullaby My best I swear I'll try I believe they start with falling cradles Or mockingbirds that cannot sing No guitars or drums so playing ladles No diamonds, so brass will be your ring How many sweet dreams could these bring.... So as you are hurtling down from high Or trying to ignore an off key bird Banging pots with utensils, not sure why A looking glass has helped I've heard But that also seems absurd Lullabies seem sad and sometimes tragic An Odd combination to allow Maybe there should be more magic So if you fall from a breaking bough I promise I'll always catch you somehow March 14, 2023 L words poetry contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 4/3/2023 3:06:00 PM
Hat, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your sweet poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:25:00 PM
Thanks for hosting :)
Date: 3/21/2023 10:56:00 AM
Good point Hat! But through all of the falling cradles and broken diamond rings there you are as a loving parent to catch the baby in constant reassuring love. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 3/17/2023 10:30:00 AM
Aah, Hat. A poem so sweet, especially your last two lines. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/17/2023 9:10:00 AM
Congratulations Hat. A beautiful Poem.
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Date: 3/17/2023 7:23:00 AM
"if you fall from a breaking bough I promise I'll always catch you somehow" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/17/2023 7:23:00 AM
Love this Hat. I think it's a great lullaby. :) Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/15/2023 3:50:00 PM
A lullabye is what the parent wants it to be and I bet you sing this beautifully
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Date: 3/15/2023 4:06:00 AM
- Lullaby should be filled with magic and love ... we will always do our best for the child ... best wishes in the contest, H.B. :) -
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Date: 3/14/2023 11:28:00 PM
My eyes opened wider with each line I read, love the last line and concept - good luck in the contest:)
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