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Love's Dance

Dance the tortuous path of love with me, explore nuances of the different roads, some snake upwards towards lofty thrills others zigzagging downwards in despair. Together though we can construe a life exhilarating and true as we wander together in wondrous ways enjoy the beauty of a laudable life, build a base to face the storms of love, and like a sparkling mountain stream face all the currents that cross our life. Let us find comfort in each other's arms, when grief crosses our meandering paths, for the stream winds and turns and a new page of life pleasantly begins Let us laugh together at our mistakes for in laughter, we find strength and ostracize despair from our love.

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Date: 3/26/2023 12:02:00 PM
Hi Victor, This is a lovely love write. I enjoyed this very much:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/25/2023 6:14:00 PM
Wow! So lovely and inspiring my dear friend Victor. I love every line especially the great ending lines. Thanks for sharing. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 3/25/2023 1:51:00 PM
Wonderful Victor, love is a never ending dance of romance, quick or slow whatever the tempo… Belle
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Date: 3/23/2023 7:34:00 PM
Awesome love poem, Victor:)
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Date: 3/23/2023 11:23:00 AM
Another romantic write from you Victor. Love it!
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Date: 3/23/2023 2:53:00 AM
Victor Victor Victor. This is extremely beautiful with such feeling that reaches the reader. I will leave it at that. Wonderful poetry as always Victor. Truly. Have a beautiful and peaceful day now and always. Love and Blessings now and always as well. (smile)
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Date: 3/22/2023 8:31:00 PM
Beautifully penned Victor, the road of love takes many turns...
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Date: 3/22/2023 3:57:00 PM
Victor, wonderfully romantic!
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Date: 3/22/2023 1:17:00 PM
A lovely write. Loved your ending. "laughter" Be blessed as you write away..............
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Date: 3/22/2023 10:55:00 AM
Tortuous paths of love, when weathered through a lifetime, bring memories and joy. Be blessed, dear one!
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Date: 3/21/2023 10:11:00 PM
A captivating poem, that is a portrayal of genuine love. Beautifully titled. :)
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Date: 3/21/2023 9:26:00 AM
Very romantic feeling my friend , great write. Blessings
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Date: 3/21/2023 8:53:00 AM
Can it be love dear Victor if it ostracizes despair ? Still I liked your poem.
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Date: 3/21/2023 7:15:00 AM
Victor you are very good and exercise your talent to keep us all in awe. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/21/2023 6:34:00 AM
- When love develops and becomes a secure base, one can face everything ... beautifully, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 3/21/2023 5:48:00 AM
Much enjoyed the missives of this metaphoric poem, Victor. Truly inspirational write.
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Date: 3/21/2023 5:47:00 AM
In spite of all the upheaval and snakes cooperating to heal and assist one another, this is a great and helpful message. A verse that is consistently illuminating, inspiring, and cheerful.
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