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Love Bug

When everything starts going awry No qualms in acceding to a special mortal, no matter how grouchy All gospels on controlling sentiments go down the drain Blessed and cursed simultaneously like an ounce of hydration in a desert of sand Seemingly the only logical thing Belies all the comments on being just a fling No matter how much bereavement it brings It is the least ransom one can afford in love from which sightseers cringe Getting enraptured by it Even on loosing precious moments one feels most fit Hope sapped by the fact As it doesn't seem right Still unable to curb Though one tries with might Only consolation in prenominal testament That the chosen one is in sight Prays for divergence from feeling atrabilious And to channelise energy for what is more precious

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/18/2017 3:14:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, I ve read your other poems also and also commented on one is past, you do have excellent talent for poetey, your every poem is brilliant and more beautiful than the other however as said before i will really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 6/18/2017 3:14:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, I ve read your other poems also and also commented on one is past, you do have excellent talent for poetey, your every poem is brilliant and more beautiful than the other however as said before i will really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 11/24/2015 4:51:00 PM
A great way in describing love in a buggy way. Love the way you held logic your own personal way. A sweet 7 poem. SKAT
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/24/2015 5:12:00 PM
Even the love in the form you see it might not be your companion still some part, the experiences, the feelings maybe just the touch will leave you somehow changed. Just like a bug.
Date: 8/24/2015 12:19:00 PM
I liked your love bug poem. Your feelings are well expressed here. And thanks for stopping by to read one of my poems. Welcome to poetry soup and we're here to be your poetry friend and help you with any questions you might have. Blessings, ~~~Darlene
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/24/2015 1:01:00 PM
I am happy you liked it
Date: 8/10/2015 8:23:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem, laid out well and described with feelings written from the heart. Emile.
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/10/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thankyou. Sometimes when you think you are at your lowest ebb, creativity seems to have more substance
Date: 8/9/2015 6:33:00 PM
Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 8/9/2015 11:20:00 PM
I feel that love in any form, no matter how old fashioned it seems, is like an addiction. Please read through my other poems if u wish and i would like to know what you think of them

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