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Love at First Sight - A Pantoum

How lovely it was to romp on the grass, How easy it was to make friends with her. I saw her in a car a comely lass, But their red car sped on in quite a blur. How easy it was to make friends with her. I barked at my master to make him speed. But their red car sped on in quite a blur. We both caught up to park, and we were freed. I barked at my master to make him speed. I saw her in a car a comely lass, We both caught up to park, and we were freed. How lovely it was to romp on the grass.

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Date: 3/4/2025 10:30:00 AM
Victor, your happy ending makes me smile. An excellent Pantoum, my friend.
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Date: 3/4/2025 5:41:00 AM
Dear Victor, this was such a delightful read! The pantoum structure gives it a rhythmic charm, and the playful perspective adds so much warmth. You captured the joy of connection so beautifully and innocent, spontaneous, and full of life. I loved every moment of it! Spring Blesssings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 3/4/2025 1:37:00 AM
So adorable. I love watching dogs play in the park near us, their infectious joy passes on to everyone around. Gods gift to man. You have penned a great poem dear Victor...Hugs
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Date: 3/3/2025 10:46:00 PM
I like this charming pantomime. I especially enjoy that this time you got the girl. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/3/2025 10:32:00 PM
How simply adorable Victor! I love it :) <3
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Date: 3/3/2025 10:05:00 PM
Ahh, Victor, king of the pantoum! Another super one! Love how it ends! You should jead an online class in this form! A lovely image. A Fave for me! Have a wonderful day. I’m ready to sleep…you’re probably having breakfast…
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Date: 3/3/2025 8:27:00 PM
Excellent pantoum! Victor, your love poems are always so passionate and vibrant with emotions.
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Date: 3/3/2025 8:53:00 AM
Great pantonum, I have not written one i
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Date: 3/3/2025 5:42:00 AM
So cute!
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Date: 3/3/2025 1:40:00 AM
beautiful Victor, love how you did this.
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Date: 3/2/2025 10:01:00 PM
A charming real life experience described so nicely.Like the poem.
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Date: 3/2/2025 8:24:00 PM
Victor, I really love this tale of a delightful play date. So cute! :)
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Date: 3/2/2025 3:56:00 AM
Quite a romantic verse Victor, don't find that form easy. Tom
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Date: 3/2/2025 2:30:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Victor ... I can see them playing on the grass :) - hugs
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