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Lotus Bloom

lotus bloom corsage in moonlight ~ prom night jitters Submitted on March 16, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAR 17) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on June 21, 2020

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Kim Merryman

Date: 3/18/2021 4:19:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2021 7:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim ~

L. J. Carber

Date: 3/18/2021 7:28:00 AM

I like the unexpected contrast--the sign of a good haiku! Congrats Line on your win

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2021 7:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, LJ ~

Carol Mitra

Date: 3/17/2021 9:45:00 PM

Wow...short and sweet...Congrats on your win Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/18/2021 7:23:00 PM

Thanks, Carol ~

Jan Allison

Date: 6/25/2020 6:17:00 PM

love that final line!, a well penned haiku Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/26/2020 12:26:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/22/2020 10:19:00 PM

So fun! A great memory for me. Great twist!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2020 10:39:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/22/2020 6:04:00 AM

fantastic ..........

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/22/2020 10:22:00 AM

Thank you, Mahtab. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/21/2020 10:58:00 PM

Ah! The unexpected last line! Terrific, Line!... Will Prom make a comeback next year, I wonder... At least flowers are safe!! TGFT (Thank God for That!). Light and Joy, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2020 11:15:00 PM

Much appreciated, Gershon.