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Loser

There once was a pudgy old elf he loaded the toys from the shelf filled the sleigh full too heavy to pull needed to lose half of himself

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Date: 12/4/2022 8:58:00 AM
Hey, watch it, Linda. I resemble that remark ;)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:31:00 AM
LOL Steven! I'm afraid I do too. :0. Thanks for stopping by! :)
Date: 12/3/2022 9:17:00 AM
Think we'll all need to lose a bit of ourselves after Christmas lol. Tom
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:31:00 AM
I will for sure! Started with Thanksgiving for me. :0 Thanks for commenting Tom. :)
Date: 12/3/2022 8:30:00 AM
Really cute Linda! Debx
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:30:00 AM
Hi Deb! Thanks for stopping by and commenting. I appreciate it! :)
Date: 12/3/2022 8:16:00 AM
Aw, this is a cute one, Linda. I'm afraid many of us experience this problem.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Milt. Sadly so. Many people live to eat, not eat to live. It's just that so many things taste so good! LOL
Date: 12/3/2022 7:59:00 AM
I know that guy! lol, enjoyed
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:28:00 AM
Ha Jeff! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)
Date: 12/3/2022 7:58:00 AM
Great Limerick Linda. ( too much Christmas cake maybe ?) Loved it. Best Wishes.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:27:00 AM
Hey Wendy! Thanks for the visit and comments. Yes, cake, pie, cookies, candy...all the things we don't need. LOL

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