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Longed For Comfort

D e e p vines embrace the TOMBS that lie disgraced in the old... Peace Gardens Graveyard.
Such an ironic name for a cemetery ebbing away as each headstone was covered with neglected foliage. Headstones lay b r o k e n and released from the ground as I wander glaring at each name engraved. The ambiance felt dark. Ebony dark. Blackness covered the ground and the dead trees that used to be lively continue to rot in dry thirst. I heard once that it was haunted. I mean continually possessed by ghostly figures searching for souls to cause trepidation. I don’t believe in any of that nonsense. I just share a deep connection to the dead and love horrific sights as they excite my anime. -I know one thing… I am plagued by frequent memories and settled in regret- I see visions of loved ones bodies in caskets- so hard to forget… When I look at mossy COVERED tomb stones I feel right at home- My ability to connect with the dead is still widely unknown… As I search for creepy old fashioned names I recall Monsignor Gerard. A prison priest I knew many a year ago who was murdered by an inmate. I knew he was buried here at this exact graveyard. Eyes quickly moving to the right then to the left reading the names of people who have suffered death and now their bodies are just stuck in a box d e c a y i n g more and more as each day passes. Then I see it… “Monsignor Gerard Smithers Maker of Peace 1901-1954”. He was too young to die. Especially the way he died by a man who was imprisoned for murdering his wife and child and was serving life behind bars. He was an atheist and saw Monsignor IN the hallway after prayer service. Suddenly s t r a n g l e d him and he lied on the ground lifeless. -I know one thing… Some people don’t deserve to be buried in such deserted silence- A man of the Lord suffered a cruel death by hatred and violence... His tomb covered in DECOMPOSING hunger for loved ones to come visit- But no one he knew thought it to be an indispensable requisite... Deep vines embrace the tombs that lie disgraced in the old Peace Gardens Graveyard. Rotting juniper VINES cling to each of the corpses home as if it l o n g e d for comfort also. Overgrown With Vines - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Broken Wings Date Written: September 24, 2016

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Date: 10/19/2016 4:31:00 PM
VERY GOOD. amazing. only problem is that you make it seem like all atheists are hateful and mean, but overall, great poem.
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Date: 10/10/2016 5:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, luloo. Great story.
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Date: 10/9/2016 4:04:00 PM
This piem was great. Very eerie and fit the contest perfectly. I lije how you draw the reader.in.like one of those I don't want to look moments but I can't help myself. Really nicely done.
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Date: 10/9/2016 3:18:00 PM
Laura, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest, what a skillful and wonderfully penned story, I was enthralled from word one, and oh do I like your creative style ~
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Date: 10/9/2016 12:58:00 PM
A 7 for your very moving, somber, WINNING poem, Luloo! Janice
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Date: 10/9/2016 12:11:00 PM
Great write and win Laura...Congrats
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:07:00 AM
Laura, loved the write. A little creepy, a little dark, I was waiting for something to reach out and grab you but it was also sad about the Monsignor.
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:15:00 AM
thank you dear James :)-luloo
Date: 10/9/2016 6:57:00 AM
Congrats on a well written win. Thanks for the walk.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2016 11:15:00 AM
thank you Jack :)-luloo
Date: 10/8/2016 4:18:00 PM
Congats on your shaped lines so well composed!!Way to go!! I admire your place in the winners' line up..Sara
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2016 11:14:00 AM
thank you sweet Sara :)-luloo
Date: 10/8/2016 2:12:00 PM
Very good write !Congratulations on your win, Laura , : ) Hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/9/2016 11:14:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo
Date: 10/8/2016 2:06:00 PM
WoW! Laura, I don't know how I missed this well written write. It is such a sad tale. That priest was too young to die. He died a horrible death doing the Lord's will. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 10/9/2016 11:09:00 AM
thank you sweet Alexis :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2016 4:05:00 PM
This is excellent. A Fav!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 9:59:00 AM
thank you Maurice :)-luloo

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