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Off and on, I feel lonesome, can't arise. I'm in such pain surfeit, can't drowse. Rolling aside sweeps hurl, toss on the side. Drop to my knees, leak why I have cried. Cipher on this planet appeals to me. Constantly on the stand for the story. A sapped shell is all that is left empty. Deserve the sign that dwells is ready. My heart weeps for your insight. And your unwavering devotion. I was ecstatic when left late at night. And refrain from refuting to any notion. Or a flower will bud in life's greenery.  Keep your head apart from scenery.
Written: February 18, 2022 A Brian Strand Rime Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/19/2022 7:25:00 AM
Dedection of great loneliness and sadness.
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Date: 2/19/2022 6:48:00 AM
A deeply emotive sonnet which rhymes and flows so well..
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Date: 2/19/2022 6:00:00 AM
I hear and feel the poignancy. A great emotive write, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/19/2022 1:10:00 AM
Great emotions. Well done.
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Date: 2/18/2022 7:59:00 PM
I can feel the intensity of the pain suffered by a lonesome soul. A deeply touching write, dear friend !
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Date: 2/18/2022 5:52:00 PM
WoW! Lasaad, What a well-written Sonnet about a lonesome soul. I found it to be quite profound. Have a nice day and weekend -Alexis
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