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I see it, little one ... in the magic of your eyes - 'tis the world, blooming wondrous! bright, dazzling dreams of a midday meadow a softened sweep of butterfly wings, azure-bound the warm, wobbly mud of a May puddle and a kiss, stolen from your cheek by a sweet smile in pinafore and pigtails oh, how your absinthe gaze dances, splattered with tendrils of shimmering gold ... a million mercurial meanderings, borne alighting like fireflies on the weeds of your thoughts, and tickled by the breezes of possibility - "what if?" they whisper ... answers blossom in your mind like rare orchids all that is imagined, and all that beyond! little man, so dear ... such fearsome, fine enchantments await - you are a book of perplexity and blank pages that time and love and learning wait to write upon ... a grand tome of course and experience - the splendid circus and surreptitious story, Life that twirls and prances in your eyes and whose magnificent, mysterious, marvelous conclusion ... I will leave ... to you. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "2 To 12" Poetry Contest, Beth Evans, Judge & Sponsor. ~ For my Grand-nephew, Killian ... all my hopes, little man. ~

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Date: 11/23/2019 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations, dear Greg! Love: By a sweet smile in pinafore and pigtails.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 8:19:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Kim - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 11/22/2019 12:31:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Greg
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 8:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gregory! :o)
Date: 11/21/2019 7:59:00 PM
superb poetry, so magical, Greg. Big congratulations to you.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 8:19:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Andrea - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 11/8/2019 6:20:00 AM
Wonderfully expressed. Impressive write. Blessings to you, Gina
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/8/2019 9:31:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Regina, that's very thoughtful of you to say! Blessings, My Friend! :o) <3

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