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Nothing said of anger Rings loud in peals of silence No less pain is heard

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Constance La France

Date: 3/24/2016 8:41:00 AM

Charlie, wonderful Haiku, there is nothing more spirit damaging than that silence, I am liking this 7 ~

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/24/2016 8:55:00 AM

Well put Broken Wings, thank you...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2016 3:58:00 PM

the last line rings very loud and true!

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/9/2016 5:57:00 PM

Thanks for the visit Andrea, we agree

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/9/2016 11:28:00 AM

How true are these words of wisdom in your powerful Haiku, Charlie. Well done. Sandra

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/9/2016 12:27:00 PM

So kind of you to spend time with me, thank you Dandra

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/9/2016 12:27:00 PM

Sorry, Sandra

Jayne Eggins

Date: 3/8/2016 4:46:00 AM

Well done Charlie .. I love Haiku one of my favourite forms !! #7

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/8/2016 6:31:00 AM

The beauty of the form comes from the volume said as quietly efficient as possible and still hold a rhythmic reverence to a truth. At least that's my take. I do so appreciate your response Jayne, thank you