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Written on August 18, 2024

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There is a story in her eyes Listen to her, before she dies past dreary storms of pain and loss her soul’s been made whole by His cross there is a time for gentle words timeless truths serenade like birds listen to how the sea can toss her soul’s been made whole by His cross there is light in her life and times her heart a poem that still rhymes her eyes shine with such sparkling gloss her soul’s been made whole by His cross There is a beauty in her tears Despite so many fears and years she still kneels before her true boss her soul’s been made whole by His cross there’s music that my soul can hear in her eyes, there’s joy so sincere He rids her of darkness and dross her soul’s been made whole by His cross

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Date: 8/19/2024 5:35:00 AM
Dear Gina, What a wonderful poem to read this morning. The CROSS! is the answer and you laid it out so well. - Blessings, MY Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/18/2024 9:20:00 PM
beautiful work filled with compassion and soulful insights, gina!
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Date: 8/18/2024 4:59:00 AM
Such an emotional piece Regina, I can picture this so clearly (with tears in my eyes) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/18/2024 4:11:00 AM
An excellent use of form, you do this form so well.. I could feel the emotions in your poem..
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