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Lilith wrapped in a serpent

She turned looking upward To the enthralling, seductive voice It emerges Wound around the shade Of the top fruit branches enigmatic Fire and flame, devouring Descending upon her. Her long sensual hair cascade downward Melting her petite soft cream form Trembling, she and him entirely alone In the fire light of the universe Feeling the immortal's magic Of its intense seductive celebration. The execution performance of its rich words Spurs an infinite power overcoming her soul. 5/28/2024

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Date: 6/12/2024 1:06:00 PM
You captured her essence really well. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 5/31/2024 2:07:00 PM
Beautiful and sensuous write!! All the best in the contest!
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Date: 5/31/2024 9:41:00 AM
Eve, wonderful poem, best of luck in the contest, hugs
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Date: 5/31/2024 2:35:00 AM
There is emotion of sorts in your poem. Quite visual. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 5/28/2024 5:17:00 PM
Your poem painted such an awesome visual of Lilith. Best wishes with this contest entry, hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/28/2024 4:49:00 PM
Well done, Eve!
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