Lightning Struck

lightning struck bringing thunder with it fear in child’s eyes Russell Sivey

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2012 4:36:00 PM

holding my breat as I read for as a child I did not like thunder or lightening.. but now appreciate the magnificence and beauty of its power Russell.. tremendous luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2012 8:03:00 AM

Yes, that is a fearful sight for the young..Enjoyed reading the creative and expressive work this morn..Thanks for stopping by...My husband has to plant at least something in the garden every year..He planted a big one and now is having back problems..I am not able to get out there and do the work anymore so I wish that you were near to harvest some of the crop..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/12/2012 8:05:00 AM

My grandson picked a four gallon bucket of peas off of two vines..We have eaten peas three days in a row..I fixed corn two days in a row but it was not quite filled out enough yet..It will be by Saturday or Sunday..We have had more tomatoes than we can eat and other vegetables ...Sara

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/12/2012 6:40:00 AM

this is so true w/my little girl (9) -the rumbling and lightning scare her and she comes running...btw, thanks for your positive comments on my work :)

Jayachandran Chakrapany

Date: 7/12/2012 12:31:00 AM

two separate moments combined beautifully and the result is the birth of a beautiful and great haiku .thank you for sharing .jk

Tim B

Date: 7/11/2012 10:37:00 PM

All one can do is pray for it to move on, it is wont to strike from time to time. Those who respect it and fear it can avoid the wrath of its fury. You capture the essence of that fear well my friend. Thanks for sharing.

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 7/11/2012 10:08:00 PM

‡ Yesss, Tis Part Of The Beauty Within A Precious Little Child, Sweet Friend * I Love The Compassion It Seems Along With The Splendid Scene * Could You Imagine If The World Will Filled Through & Through The Beauty Of A Child * My Luv, Rachel ‡

Robert Pettit

Date: 7/11/2012 9:21:00 PM

If it strikes close enough, it can bring fear into an adult's eyes as well. Did you see those players down in Arlington, Texas running into the dugouts for cover after a close call the other day?