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Lightning and Thunder

Lightning and thunder, Vortex swirls above my head. I cannot hear you.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/8/2014 2:58:00 PM

Yep, such conditions can leave the listener struggling to hear, James :)

John Rey Canon
Date: 9/8/2014 8:54:00 PM

That I long for someone's voice, a familiar one, from the deafening crowd.

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/27/2014 8:45:00 PM

Congrats, John, for your win.

John Rey Canon
Date: 8/27/2014 8:53:00 PM

Thank you ma'am

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2014 7:59:00 PM

thank you John, for the reply

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2014 5:26:00 PM

This does have that haiku feel to it!! Congrats for your win.

John Rey Canon
Date: 8/26/2014 7:47:00 PM

thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 3:38:00 PM

John, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

John Rey Canon
Date: 8/26/2014 7:48:00 PM

thank you ma'am. It's satisfying.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/30/2014 8:04:00 AM

Thank you John... That contest will be judged tomorrow... hopefully... Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 7:19:00 PM

John, , Love the scenario .... Enjoyed the Haiku.... LINDA

John Rey Canon
Date: 7/30/2014 1:12:00 AM

I made it for a contest you host. thank you ma'am.