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Life Line

more defining than my laughlines the line above my cocked brow 17.12.20 Composed for S. Grace's "wonderful one liners"

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/22/2017 10:19:00 PM

A monoku with personality, Maureen! Janice

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/22/2017 10:36:00 PM

:) ! Thank you Janice!

Roy Pett

Date: 12/22/2017 10:42:00 AM

This is a wonderful one liner Maureen, I have that many wrinkles I don’t know which line in which lol, GL in contest. :))

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/22/2017 10:53:00 AM

Lol! Mine are just starting. This one I just noticed a couple weeks ago, amused me to no end. Well to this end I suppose :) xomo!

John Lawless

Date: 12/22/2017 7:07:00 AM

don't give me that look Maureen....I like this one.....and I have seen that look too, too often in my days.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/22/2017 8:04:00 AM

I really can't help it I swear! Giggles :) xomo!

Pipping Stars

Date: 12/21/2017 5:42:00 AM

A make it always known to face ... tattoo it ...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/21/2017 6:55:00 AM

Time is effectively doing that :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/21/2017 3:26:00 AM

Brilliant one.. Reads like a winner...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/21/2017 6:56:00 AM

Thank you Supraja! :) xomo!

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/20/2017 5:09:00 PM

Oh clever indeed, a winner for me..

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/20/2017 9:48:00 PM

Thank you Harry :) xomo!

Silent One

Date: 12/20/2017 3:24:00 PM

Haha... good one Mo.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/20/2017 3:47:00 PM

Thank you :) xomo!

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/20/2017 2:43:00 PM

Written clearly for others to see...you get the mirrored version to forget quickly. Just joking... I called it " A Power Line" All the best Maureen

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/20/2017 3:45:00 PM

You funny :) cheers dear! xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2017 1:45:00 PM

OH MY, I can really relate to this one!! WELL DONE

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/20/2017 1:48:00 PM

Ha! Awesome :) some giggles too! Thank you Andrea! xomo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/20/2017 1:20:00 PM

Very clever .. hits the mark!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/20/2017 1:39:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! :) xomo!

Tim Smith

Date: 12/20/2017 12:03:00 PM

That is the one we should be weary about

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/20/2017 1:35:00 PM

Giggle, you know it! ...every time you click on one of mine xo!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2017 12:01:00 PM

You concentrator, you! Clever line. Good luck in the contest, this is certainly original and, I think, a brain sticker for readers. All the best ... CayCay

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 12/20/2017 1:37:00 PM

Giggles :) thank you so much! xo mo!