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Let It Play On

From the violin of lady fair soft classical notes fill the air. soothing music floats through open french doors carried on a summer breeze billowing lace curtains As I lie upon the chaise lounge in and out of sleep I doze. Sweet melody a lullaby. Heavy eyelids begin to close. Deep in my slumber he comes to me in a dream. In his arms I swoon as we waltz to Blue Danube. Forever let it play on. Broken Wing's contest. It's All About Four. 23/04/2018

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/1/2018 8:17:00 PM

Jean, great imagery {:~) congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*

Jean Murray
Date: 5/2/2018 4:09:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/1/2018 10:28:00 AM

Oh wow, gorgeous

Jean Murray
Date: 5/1/2018 2:09:00 PM

Not as wow as your recent offerings unfortunately Tim.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/30/2018 4:11:00 PM

music to my ears... big congrats, jean.. huggs

Jean Murray
Date: 4/30/2018 4:13:00 PM

That's lovely Nette. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2018 5:46:00 PM

I started from the bottom up, seeing most of the poems and working my way up the list. So far, this is one of my favorites. Just beautiful. Congrats for your win, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2018 5:55:00 PM

That is just the sweetest thing, especially from you Andrea. Heartfelt thank you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/29/2018 5:02:00 PM

What a lovely dream, sweet Jean! Congrats!

Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2018 5:15:00 PM

Thank you Kim.

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/29/2018 11:26:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jean,, wonderful poetry, you really take the reader there...

Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2018 11:31:00 AM

Thank you Harry.

Constance La France

Date: 4/29/2018 10:37:00 AM

Jean, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest, I really liked your dreamy write, well done !

Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2018 11:09:00 AM

I enjoyed the process Constance. Thank you for my placement.

James Inman

Date: 4/29/2018 8:20:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Jean, beautiful dream.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2018 8:28:00 AM

Thank you James.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/29/2018 7:18:00 AM

Back with well deserved congrats, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2018 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/29/2018 3:07:00 AM

I did come to you in a dream, jean, but you locked the bloody French doors :(

Jean Murray
Date: 4/29/2018 3:09:00 AM

So it was you? If only I knew..... Actually I do have French doors leading into my bedroom that I lock at night Viv. How did you know that? Oh yes of course, in dreams we can travel far.