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Layers of Life, by Suzette Richards – Image generated 10 January 2024.


 

Walking through the door of my childhood home brought back tsunami of wisdom overture. Tastes and colours in décor change with culture; varied pallet of history in lands roam’. My children had turned out to be a challenge as they had early on displayed my talent for examining and questioning latent defects papered over; now seeking balance. We’d a small, intimate wedding reception. The wallpaper in the lounge is instantly recognisable (like kin related distantly), from the photos. No inkling of deception. My parents had asked this sweet sixteen to voice her preference for bedroom to replace staid pattern reminiscent of a fabric plaid. But they had vetoed black and white Op Art choice. The celebrations of the many milestones, spanning the blessed years of three generations firmly recorded in the decorations; layers of peeling wallpaper to bare bones.

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Date: 6/7/2024 2:34:00 PM
And I see it's a POTD? Well deserved.
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Date: 6/7/2024 9:41:00 PM
Thanks :)
Date: 6/6/2024 4:17:00 PM
I love how you wrote this. Such memories
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Date: 6/6/2024 9:58:00 PM
I aimed to recall each memory in reverse order as though the pealing wallpaper represented it.
Date: 6/6/2024 9:31:00 AM
Back to Congratulate you, Suzette, on POTD…belated…catching up.
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Date: 6/6/2024 10:05:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim :)
Date: 6/5/2024 7:27:00 AM
A moving, skillfully-written analogy of the changes in things and people, Suzette. Janice
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Date: 6/5/2024 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, Janice :)
Date: 6/3/2024 3:14:00 AM
I've limited internet connectivity. I would like to thank all for your kind comments and thoughtful observations. Suzette
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Date: 6/2/2024 6:09:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Suzette, on receiving honour of POTD. You have created a profoundly captivating poem using not-so-common format! The last line is an exceptionally creative metaphor ! Best wishes to you ~
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Date: 6/2/2024 5:42:00 PM
I've never thought about comparing ' layers of life, ' to ' peeling wallpaper. ' Very interesting, indeed. Your thoughts are tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Suzette, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/2/2024 11:53:00 AM
Beautiful poem Suzette. Very touching and well expressed. Many Congratulations on today's POTD. Have a nice awarded day!
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Date: 6/2/2024 11:04:00 AM
Suzette, congratulations! Poem of the day is in the rhyme scheme abba or where the first- and fourth-lines rhyme, an enclosed rhyme. Beautifully penned fleeting yet profound impressions, last line an apt metaphor, in a bio setting. Enjoy!
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Date: 6/2/2024 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations Suzette on this POTD. It reminded me of just driving by my former home of forty years which was emotionally devastating for me. The new owner had cut down the Japanese maple by the fish pond and removed all the pine tree barriers that had blocked the high speed rails. You are much braver then me to go inside.
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Date: 6/2/2024 9:11:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Layers of Life" write again.  Have a great/blessed week with your win..............
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Date: 6/2/2024 8:20:00 AM
Beautifully penned reminising, enclosed rhymes are not so easy to write, really enjoyed this one. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Suzette
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Date: 6/2/2024 7:18:00 AM
A wonderful poem. Full of visual imagery and feeling from the beginning to the end. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 6/2/2024 6:09:00 AM
Dear Suzette, many congratulations on your POTD recognition. Like the wallpaper, there’s so many layers here to this beautifully written poem. Perfect enclosed rhyme with wonderful flow. It’s such an engaging read as the reader fills part of all the years and memories that have past. ‘ Layers of peeling wallpaper to bare bones’ is so profound and an exceptional line in particular. Really enjoyed appreciating your talent here. Enjoy your celebratory day. Blessings to you :)
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Date: 6/2/2024 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Well deserved.
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Date: 6/2/2024 4:42:00 AM
DearSuzette, your poem transported me through generations, peeling back layers of memories like wallpaper. The way you weave together family, culture, and the passage of time is breathtakingly beautiful. Earning POTD is so well-deserved. Your talent for capturing the depths of human experience through exquisite wordcraft is truly awe-inspiring. Huge congratulations on this phenomenal achievement - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 6/2/2024 2:51:00 AM
A lovely walk through your childhood home Suzette. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 6/2/2024 12:53:00 AM
Love your reminiscent potd! Congratulations
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Date: 5/31/2024 5:04:00 PM
layers of peeling wallpaper to bare bones…so interesting!
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Date: 5/31/2024 12:01:00 PM
"Layers of Life" is a lovely write with a lovely picture. Great memories are the best kind to have. I have taken off many rooms of wallpaper over the years. Not fun/hard work.... Have A Great/Blessed ~ Day/Weekend Writing Away...............
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