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Written - 3rd November 2023
Labyrinthine, Languish, Letter - words Poetry Contest
 Sponsored by: Constance La France 

 

Labyrinthine

There’s no hiding place beneath moon or sun Christ see's it all as the planet is spun. Quote - Poet’s own
Life’s a labyrinthine of twisting roads Roads that direct us to our final home At times we find ourselves stuck at crossroads Despair not for there’s many roads to roam. One day we’ll arrive where we aim to be Could be paradise or a cell in hell Eternal happiness or misery How well one has travelled life, who can tell. The roads not taken could be for the best It's the narrow roads that lead one to grace Pick wrong labyrinthine and fail God's test And not meet the King of Kings face to face. To the left or to the right it’s your choice Have faith in your heart and follow the light In the distance sweet angels will rejoice And a room’s prepared with heaven’s foresight.

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Date: 11/11/2023 8:31:00 PM
I see below that congratulations are in order for your contest win, my friend! Yeah! A lot of wisdom in this poem, Belle. I hope people see the message you are sharing. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2023 1:42:00 AM
Thank you Bill very much, poet pal Belle
Date: 11/10/2023 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write/picture/great quote. Have a great day............
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/10/2023 4:40:00 PM
Thank you Paula, pleased you enjoyed the read. Have a lovely day too… Belle
Date: 11/10/2023 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Belle, a very fine poem.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/10/2023 4:39:00 PM
Thank yiu Terry, appreciated very much… Belle
Date: 11/9/2023 8:39:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top win, Belle :) - hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/9/2023 12:18:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne-Lise, appreciated… Belle
Date: 11/5/2023 6:00:00 PM
your poem promises great things done in powerful ways, I really enjoyed reading this dear poet
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/5/2023 6:20:00 PM
I’m pleased you enjoyed the read, thank you Rose… Belle
Date: 11/4/2023 7:40:00 AM
What a beautiful philosophical discussion, Belle. There's a lot to learn from your poem: It's your call, go left or right. Excellent advice to trust oneself and go in the direction of the light.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/4/2023 10:45:00 AM
Thank you Sotto, appreciated very much… Belle
Date: 11/4/2023 6:13:00 AM
- Our choices ... all depending on our choices ... a lovely poem, Belle :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/4/2023 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise :) enjoy the weekend too… Belle
Date: 11/4/2023 1:54:00 AM
Yes, we do have a choice. But in reality, we don't. Our only choice leads to heavenly bliss. Blessings.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/4/2023 2:09:00 AM
Hopefully our choices lead us to heavens door. Thank you Victor… Belle
Date: 11/3/2023 4:34:00 PM
A splendid dialogue on life, Belle. Much to gleam from your poem: To the left or to the right it’s your choice Have faith in your heart and follow the light--well said!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/3/2023 5:07:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay, I truly appreciate that… Belle
Date: 11/3/2023 4:03:00 PM
First of all a quote of perfection, to me. Oh yes Belle, they say a maze we get lost in, a labyrinth we find ourselves! Smashing work! ...like you Brits say :D
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/3/2023 5:06:00 PM
Thank you Anaya, pleased you like the poem and quote. Good work or smashing work is what the Brits usual say :D ~ Belle
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