Kuhlmann-Winter

In January: ice, black, freeze: slippery roads

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James Fraser

Date: 12/18/2009 1:08:00 PM

Brrrrrrrrrrrrrr, January >> kool piece >> James

Sheol Moribund

Date: 12/18/2009 7:47:00 AM

Dear Audrey: Interesting poem, but what does Kuhlamann mean (Town,city?). Keep on writing, great job. As always...yours truly: Sheol

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/17/2009 9:22:00 AM

What is surprising and make the reader thinks is the adjective black ... rarely seen in association with winter ... but gives a contrast that make us look and look around ... for the skies sometimes cloak us in a color such as that ... Very good, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/16/2009 5:49:00 PM

Interesting verse describing winter. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/16/2009 2:28:00 PM

I am really starting to like this verse form of poetry .. I wrote my first one today and I so like this one u wrote... its exciting to try new forms.. I think we are contributing nicely Audrey... certainly u have .. I am still experimenting... blessings... luv... thankxxx for your always kind comments... Linda-Marie

Brian Strand

Date: 12/16/2009 12:19:00 AM

Great Audrey,look forward ro more from your pen.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/15/2009 4:51:00 PM

black ice make for slippery roads here in oklahoma as well this time of year!!