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Kiss

The sweetest connotation of a kiss, The fevered flutter of the butterflies - Soft taste of its anticipated bliss, Embellished with infatuated eyes. Such tender threshold to new lovers' tryst, Long lingering in mind, body and soul. The sacred scene, none of love stories missed - Reciprocated kiss, before the fall! Magic may dull and fade with passing days, Flash of awaiting first kiss magic - stays. March 10, 2023

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Date: 4/6/2023 6:56:00 AM
I have read your winning work and liked it. Way to go. Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 4/3/2023 3:40:00 PM
Margarita, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/20/2023 5:34:00 PM
I think I remember every "first kiss" with the men of my life. This piece places that first kiss in a single magical moment. So true! It is something that cannot be compared to anything else that follows. Well done!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/20/2023 7:22:00 PM
Tried to accentuate the moment of anticipation, but I guess it all blends into the magic kiss:)
Date: 3/15/2023 1:43:00 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/15/2023 1:59:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/14/2023 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win , Marigarta ...Nice poem.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/15/2023 1:59:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/13/2023 1:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Kiss" is a magic Rhyme write. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/15/2023 1:59:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/10/2023 11:59:00 AM
Gosh I'd all but forgotten mine... Great poem!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/10/2023 12:17:00 PM
Shhhh, I tend to remember the last ones.. ;)
Date: 3/10/2023 9:09:00 AM
I certainly remember mine. Another fine write, Maggie. good luck!
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