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Jurisprudence

Across the cracked concrete slabs, past a fallen dogwoods left lying like so much litter; at the red brick base of the courthouse, the jurors strode. Through the doors too heavy for a mere woman to open unassisted; and their constant societal reminder of place, of strength and weakness; doors serving as the first purposeful, architectural devise of disrespect; up to the toy soldiers of the city and the arched metal catcher gate, the jurors of democracy strode. Patted down and prodded, stripped of individuality, so like the cattle, they assume we are like the criminals, who we are told are.. “Presumed innocent until proven guilty.” We too are subjected to the indignities of the law. The jurors moved. Herded up, rickety elevators into the bowels of the ivory towers of jurist prudence, funneled in alphabetical order to weary clerks, who sticker, stamp and quantify us, Innumerable names to numerous lists. The jurors wait. The sheer nature of the building, the room, its officials, cowed the crowd who sat cud chewing and bottom scratching; awaiting the arrival of the Judge? I sat, longing for the days of Jefferson, the rebirth of the Renaissance man; wrestling with the morality of ignorant justice? Wondering what poor, smuck was to be brought before this modern day Madame Defarge’s who sat knitting. In this place of punishment, power and perversity; the sacrificial lambs of democracy wallowed. The hollowness of the hall, mirrored the hollowness of the statement, “A jury of PEERS?” How on earth in this nation “Under God?” Could anyone think this uneducated, and undereducated, mass of Unemployed or underemployed, aged humanity, should, could or would, be able to rightly determine anyone’s fate? What farce, this democratic process this capitalistic rigmarole; which served to do little more than place another Mc’D burger, on the table of a fat civil servant. This system of blind, weighted, judgment, which assured anything BUT justice. Which assured, as it always has, and always will; only that peons remained peons. Busily buzzing about their self-important tasks paid, unpaid and pissed on, aiding the true criminals, the ones; perpetuating poverty, homelessness, illness, and ignorance; in remaining in power. The Jury was called. The clocked marked the passing of the hour with black hands on a white face and all that was truly seen was gray.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/14/2011 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Debbie in Joe Flach's contest "Here Comes the Judge". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. This is one of the better free verse poems I have read since I first entered this site.
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Date: 3/12/2011 11:18:00 AM
KAZOOMMM!! you creamy topping you, lights!! APPLAUSE for the win... autograph please?? :) love and huggs to you! :) nette
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Date: 3/11/2011 7:41:00 PM
This sure is one awesome write Debbie. It touches one amazingly/ many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:07:00 PM
Holy moly.....I read this when you first posted it....but another reading to refresh my mind, and it blows all others out of the water! You have made the process of jury selection an experience that I must have witnessed almost as you describe it moment by moment in this compelling account...a mini movie of injustice...perhaps that goes on every day somewhere. Kuddos!!
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:33:00 PM
Kudos and congrats on your first place win in Joe's cool contest Debbie.. awesome as always with a magnificent title too.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on thefirst place win in the contest of Joe, Debbie
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Date: 3/11/2011 11:39:00 AM
Deb!! This is so worthy of First Place, OMG!! Definitely one for my Favs. List! Beyond exceptional! My congratulations on your deserving win! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this and had to read it once more. Love, Audrey
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Date: 3/11/2011 11:15:00 AM
Congrats on a well written, well deserved First Place, Deb. Awesome piece. Nice going. Kudos to yo. Have a super weekend. luv Ralph
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Date: 3/11/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on taking first place in Joe's contest, Deb! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/11/2011 9:56:00 AM
Congratulaitons Debbie on your big win in this long awaited contest. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/13/2011 3:09:00 PM
Fabulous write Debbie, regarding you message on my entry to your contest, I cannot find your contest to re-enter the poem, did it somehow show up again, I hope~~
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:53:00 PM
This is very good. Descriptive analysis of the court system, the dominance of a male-driven judicial system. I've not been on PS for a while; out of town and no access to internet, other than intermittent via my phone. soup mail to you. Love, Deb
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:09:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned with a lot of social and political thoughts included..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:41:00 AM
so enjoyable, so transparent and captivating. i love it.
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Date: 2/13/2011 5:29:00 AM
this an excellent piece you have penned
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Date: 2/12/2011 10:15:00 PM
wow, i have a glimpse of the social activist part of you.. and i am likin git.. the piece grates with symbolical touches on the virtue fo fairness.. amazing ,deb! free stye becomes you, you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/12/2011 5:14:00 PM
I had to cut it down some to fit grrrrrrr LOL
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Date: 2/12/2011 4:00:00 PM
Reading this piece reminded my of the last time I served on jury duty. As usual, your offering carries great descriptiveness.
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:48:00 PM
Very Strong issues indeed... A great Country where we are able to do just that.. so enjoyed your work my dear, as always....luv Michael
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:28:00 PM
a question? Soupmail....:)
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:24:00 PM
Amen!!! self importance wins, and "feigned justice" masks who should really be on trial....what a provocative piece this is....excellent as always! (love that ending...black hands on a white face...so many shades of gray....clouding and dimming the eyes!)
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:22:00 PM
You also may find a poem I wrote called "Depots All" interesting. Thanks again for your words. Steve
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Date: 2/12/2011 2:13:00 PM
Well written Debbie! Enjoyed reading! Steve
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