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Joe Flash's Hot Tub

If I should call and find you there Just let me know if you are bare If so, don't bother getting up I'll just get my own damn cup I enjoy all outdoors But I don't need to see all yours. Mdailey 5/26/11 This was inspired by Joe's poem about sitting in his hot tub instead of inside working.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/22/2011 4:34:00 PM

I love the thought and the ryme but b ette still is what's below. Wld boys!

Joe Flach

Date: 5/27/2011 10:02:00 AM

Just because I am bare / You need not sit and stare / There are other sites and sounds / Just take a look around / And even though you are a bloke / You can join me for a soak / First remove your clothes / Then rinse off with the hose / I keep the water clean / Come relax in the steam

Mike Dailey
Date: 5/27/2011 1:55:00 PM

I thank you for the offer / I shouldn't even balk / but two guys in a hot tub / I can hear the talk / And so before I disrobe / And join you in the steam / We've got to find some ladies / To sit there in between / And then we can just sit back / And get to know each other / I think you once refered to me / As a brother from another mother.

Mike Dailey
Date: 5/27/2011 1:43:00 PM

I think we could keep this up but folks would talk. thanks for playing along. Mike

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/27/2011 7:38:00 AM

Thank you for the wonderful poetry you have posted and are sharing with us today Mike. Wishing you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/26/2011 8:47:00 PM

nice one Mike from Joe's poem .. Joe inspires many of us poets on PS.. u did a fantastic job with the wit ...hope u enjoy a happy and safe holiday weekend..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2011 7:43:00 PM

oh, i remember seeing you use this in your comment to him. VERY good way to inspire your (a)muse!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/26/2011 6:08:00 PM

Niced rhyming , mike