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Jill Nursery Rhymes contest Sponsored by Charles Messina
Jealous Jill has a very strong will She asked Jack to climb the hill To help her take the bucket to fill When coming back Jill tripped poor Jack Where at the bottom he lay so still Jealous Jill has a very strong will And so she too tumbled down the hill This way no one would ever suspect It was she who broke Jack's neck

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Date: 11/18/2024 12:25:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Jealous Jill" write again....  Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
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Date: 11/18/2024 1:44:00 AM
LOL- poor Jack. Very cute, Crystol. Congratulations on your win in my contest! Thanks so much for entering :) Charlie
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Date: 11/1/2024 7:07:00 AM
Baaaad Jill! LOL! Good one, Crystol. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 10/30/2024 11:28:00 AM
Haha - one day, the truth finally comes out - good one!
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Date: 10/29/2024 10:10:00 AM
Poor Jack. In saying that, she did replace him with, Jack 2.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/30/2024 7:38:00 AM
Hummm... ok! Thanks for stopping by Paul! Xo
Date: 10/29/2024 7:32:00 AM
Creative and clever! Good luck in the contest!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/30/2024 7:37:00 AM
Ty Karen! Xo
Date: 10/28/2024 11:30:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun "Jealous Jill" write. Poor Jill... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away................
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/30/2024 7:37:00 AM
Il check it out! Ty! Xo
Date: 10/28/2024 10:18:00 AM
Dear Crystol, Well, that kept me captivated all the way till the end. Loved this nursery rhyme, and it was quite creative. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/30/2024 7:37:00 AM
Ty Daniel! Xo
Date: 10/28/2024 8:48:00 AM
Ha! Pretty much the same message in mine only Jack survives. Their punishment? No supper. Cute rhymes Crystol
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/28/2024 8:58:00 AM
Yess! You are the inspiration for this one! ;) thanks! Xo

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