Jake

There once was a man named Jake He had a great fear of a snake He thought he saw one Took a knife, to be done A garden hose, it was a mistake Heidi Sands 2/4/21

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/5/2021 1:50:00 PM

Cute one, Heidi! When your 'garden goes green,' including the hose, these mistakes happen! lol. ~ Wearing purple hose and using a purple hose

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/5/2021 2:51:00 PM

lol. Thank you Gershon. :)

Joseph May

Date: 2/4/2021 5:30:00 PM

Lol, Nicely done Heidi, hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2021 6:43:00 PM

Thank you Joseph :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/4/2021 4:49:00 PM

Lol! Heidi, You penned a funny limerick. I could picture the whole scene, but I wouldn’t want to be there. I enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2021 4:57:00 PM

Thank you Alexis :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2021 4:14:00 PM

Very witty. There was once a quarterback in the NFL named Jake Plummer. He was nicknamed "The Snake".

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2021 4:47:00 PM

Oh, you know about a lot of things Robert. Thank you for your informative comments :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 2/4/2021 3:27:00 PM

Lol! Good one Heidi. Made me smile a big one. I can relate to jake :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2021 3:29:00 PM

Thank you Akkina. I really appreciate your comment, because I am not too good at writing Limerick LOL I hope all is well and you have a nice evening :)