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Poetic Form: Sapphic Stanza
Inspired: 2024 June 16
Image: N/A

Mysterious displacement of matters where Spring forgets like fumbling fingers in blossoms arresting visions lingering colossal ~jewels rule pastimes Then Summer entertains those withering loss call a drummer accost this way in breaths pools beached conch shells malingering orange descends ~warms young beater's suite A lifting Fall of memories beset heaps across retiring boughs release the neglect obliged astir spiced slumbers of golden birds ~chop resounds a weigh Jack Frost recalled when Winter stalled -- cold resolve blue glacier iceberg Irish temperature pleased those icy treats cool in rime or freeze in ~luck pulls north-south poles.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/19/2024 9:46:00 AM

I chose this one to read because of the poetry form used. Creative one indeed. Thank you for sharing it with us. I want to say thank you for honoring my poetry by placing it in your winners' list. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/19/2024 10:03:00 AM

My thanks, Sara, for your round-robin sharing. Aloha, William