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Island Time Is For Me

Island time is for me 
watching the deep blue sea.
I am truly set free,
there went a yellow bee,
loving naps under the tree.
#3 Island ~ Rhyme

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Tonye George

Date: 7/20/2024 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations Dear Paula, cheers.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2024 12:09:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" rhyming write. I enjoyed writing about this fun island. Wish I was on this island. I am "Dreaming" about it. "Cheers" back to you... Have a fun day writing away...........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2024 10:36:00 PM

Short and sweet, honey bee!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/21/2024 12:06:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" rhyming write. Yes, short/sweet with a yellow bee. I am "Dreaming" about this island... Have a fun day writing away..........

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/18/2024 1:29:00 PM

I'm back with CONGRATS, Paula! Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2024 9:51:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my "Island" rhyming write again. It is always great to see you. It would be great to be on this pretty island with a coconut in hand. I am "Dreaming" about it... Have a fun day writing away................

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2024 10:35:00 AM

Congrats on your win Paula, Very nicely penned

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2024 9:47:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" rhyming write. I enjoyed writing this for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it/for my placement. I hope you will do more of these. I sure wish I was on this island with a coconut in hand. I am "Dreaming" about it... Have a fun day writing away..........

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/18/2024 9:53:00 AM

Hi Paua, I have not been around for a few days. I hope that everything is going well with you.. I like this very much and the picture. You know my poetry I like to see, and I am attracted to the poem Nice rhyme pattern, on the island..))) Shalom, Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2024 10:16:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" rhyming write. I sure wish I was on this pretty island with a coconut drink in hand. I am "Dreaming" all about it. Hahaha!!! Hope you are OK... Have a fun day writing away..........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2024 8:00:00 AM

"3 Place" ~ Island ~ Rhyme ~ Date Written:7/12/2024

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/16/2024 7:33:00 PM

Every line -- an image my mind can see! Thank you, Ma'am. ~ gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2024 1:17:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" rhyming write. I sure wish I was on this island with a coconut in hand. I am "Dreaming" about it... Have a fun day writing away..........

Valsa George

Date: 7/15/2024 9:19:00 PM

I enjoyed your beautifully rhyming verse on island life and the comfort of resting under trees. Great entry for the contest. All the Best dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/16/2024 11:18:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for All the Best. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" rhyming write. I would love to be on an island under a palm tree with a breeze. I am "Dreaming" about it... Have a fun day writing away..........

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/15/2024 1:26:00 PM

Paula, this is delightful! Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/15/2024 2:03:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found this to be delightful. I wish I was on this pretty island. I am now "Dreaming" about it... Have a fun day writing away...................

Jay Narain

Date: 7/14/2024 9:33:00 AM

Love this relaxing vacation on island retreat. The idea of bee is very creative.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/14/2024 1:08:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" write. I would love to be on an island under a palm tree. Yes, even an island can have a yellow bee. I am "Dreaming" about my island trip... Have a fun day writing away........

Ink Empress

Date: 7/13/2024 5:08:00 AM

Beautiful poem so well woven for the picture. I love this island poem so rhythmically delivered dear paula: best wishes for the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2024 8:52:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write and for your best wishes for the contest. Glad you found this to be a Beautiful poem so well woven for the picture. I love this picture. I wish I was on this island.. I am "Dreaming" about it... Have a fun day writing away........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/12/2024 7:49:00 PM

I think Island time is no time, just have fun. I like this complete idea

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2024 8:47:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" write. Oh yes, island time is No time. I love the picture. I am "Dreaming" about it... Have a fun day writing away........

Deb M

Date: 7/12/2024 12:44:00 PM

Oh Paula that is so lovely! Im coming ….Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/13/2024 8:45:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" write. I would love to have you on my island. Come on over the weather is great. Hahaha!!! I am "Dreaming" about it... Have a fun day writing away............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/12/2024 9:58:00 AM

Not even a bee will take away the beauty of Island time :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/12/2024 12:06:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my "Island" write. The yellow bee is enjoying the island time with me. Hahaha!!! Wish I was on this island, I would never come back home. "Dreaming" Have a fun day writing away........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/12/2024 9:15:00 AM

Island ~ Photo #3 ~ Rhyme ~ Date Written:7/12/2024

Island Time Is For Me

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