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Is It You

Is it you whispering through the rustling of the leaves
Or are you the soft warm evening breeze

Are you the quiet lapping of the oceans waves
Is that you talking to me from the grave

Is it you chirping in the early morning light
Telling me all your news, is it you…..am I right?

Or are you the pitter patter of the mild autumn rain
Is that you talking to me once again

Are you the peaceful sound of the trickling creek
Is that you sharing the news of your week

It has to be you when I hear a sweet melody 
You telling me your here right next to me

Or is it just me wanting it to so desperately to be you
Are you still here with me on earth….is it true?

grieflossmiss youvoicerhyme

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/21/2024 10:05:00 AM

I also wonder Deb, but hope so. This is a very emotional write and can be interpreted as one wishes to. Great thoughts. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Deb M
Date: 7/22/2024 2:21:00 PM

Thankyou my lovely friend! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/21/2024 8:22:00 AM

Hope you'll read my love poem. Cuddles.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/19/2024 8:38:00 AM

This touched my heart and I so hope they are with us even after the end of life. That they are the wind or the singing bird. Missing mom so much and this grabbed my heart today. love phyl

Deb M
Date: 7/20/2024 5:09:00 AM

Loss of our lovely mums no matter how old stays with us doesn’t Phyl….l still need her! Thanks my friend! Debx

Paul Willason

Date: 7/17/2024 5:46:00 PM

Very moving poem, some gorgeous imagery packed with emotion....the inferred silence at the end deepens the impact...the wait extending beyond the poem. Good one my friend.

Deb M
Date: 7/20/2024 5:13:00 AM

Thanks Paul….l value your thoughts a great deal! Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/17/2024 11:59:00 AM

We hope so…

Deb M
Date: 7/17/2024 12:09:00 PM

Yes we do! Thanks Kim….Debx

Warren Doll

Date: 7/17/2024 8:53:00 AM

Love is spoken to us in many ways beyond the grave. You are hearing it. Such a beautiful poem--Warren

Deb M
Date: 7/17/2024 12:10:00 PM

Oh glad you liked it Warren…..Thankyou so much! Debx

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/15/2024 10:25:00 AM

This is a beautiful, heartwarming poem.

Deb M
Date: 7/16/2024 1:22:00 PM

Thankyou Hilda….appreciate your thoughts always! Debx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/15/2024 7:32:00 AM

Oh... oh my. This squeezed my heart, Deb. So beautiful... so sad... so serene. I'm touched. Thanks for your visit.

Deb M
Date: 7/16/2024 1:20:00 PM

Hi Eileen….your lovely comment squeezed my heart!! Thankyou so much! Debx

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/15/2024 4:22:00 AM

Deb, you so eloquently put what I have thought and hoped so many times n my life! Such a delicate and beautiful poem and I think one of your very best!! Happy Monday!

Deb M
Date: 7/16/2024 1:20:00 PM

Awww thanks Mike…..that means a lot to me! Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/14/2024 7:10:00 PM

Such an intimate write, Deb. Heartwarming! :) Gershon

Deb M
Date: 7/16/2024 1:21:00 PM

Thankyou dear BB! Debx

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/14/2024 1:42:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your lovely yet sad "Is It You" write. I just wrote one about my dad. He has been gone for many years. The years may pass but the love/memories will not. So Sorry... Have a blessed day.............

Deb M
Date: 7/16/2024 1:23:00 PM

So true Paula…the memories never ever pass….they comfort both and sadden! Thankyou lovely Paula! Debx

Karen Jones

Date: 7/14/2024 11:36:00 AM

Deb this is so tender and beautiful! I think it touches the heart of anyone who lost someone yet lifts them up at the hope it could be their loved one! So sweet! Wonderful write!

Deb M
Date: 7/14/2024 11:56:00 AM

Oh Karen….thankyou so much…its about my mum who passed away a long time ago…..we had such a bond and closeness….l miss and still need her! Thankyou my sweet, sweet friend!! Debx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/14/2024 11:17:00 AM

If you feel my cuddle, then it's me. Lovely poem.

Deb M
Date: 7/14/2024 11:54:00 AM

Aww you are a sweetheart Victor! I love the new photo of you! Cuddles…Debx

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/14/2024 9:27:00 AM

Very endearing write. I can relate, spiritually and physically. I don't think loved ones ever entirely leave us...in fact, remind us, in many mysterious ways, how all is connected. Love the ending: Heaven and earth may not be so far far apart -- distance shortened by fond memory in loving heart. Blessings. Oh, if you have time, please read my short story, though a bit spooky, "Death By Proxy".

Deb M
Date: 7/14/2024 12:22:00 PM

Thankyou Joe for such a lovely comment….happy you related to it! I will check out your poem for sure! Debx

Lin Lane

Date: 7/14/2024 6:50:00 AM

Deb, these emotional lines are some of the best I've ever read from you. You really tuned in to your heart wanting to hear from lost loved ones that you miss. Every rhyming couplet is written with tenderness and longing. Loved and faved it.

Deb M
Date: 7/14/2024 12:20:00 PM

YAY…. A Fave from you Lovely Lin….. That is very special to me as is your beautiful gracious words thankyou my dear friend!! Debx