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Irish Triplets

My Irish triplets busy as bee's two on my lap one stood by my knees Patty cake Patty cake Umpteenth time My poetry? A Nursey Rhyme! Diapers, bottles Burps and toddles My poets pen was Set aside For truly then? My hands were tied

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 7/29/2021 5:39:00 PM

A very clever nursery rhyme. Well done and congratulations on your win :-) Cheers Anne

Constance La France

Date: 6/27/2021 12:15:00 PM

BJ, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win, love _Constance

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/27/2021 1:23:00 PM

Thank you Constance! I am so blessed!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/27/2021 4:57:00 AM

I am so happy that you got a placement. Congratulations on your win. Have a wonderful day ahead friend

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/27/2021 1:22:00 PM

I am actually so blessed Rama! I did not even think that I was able to get this poem in! Thank you my friend!! This is such a surprise! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/16/2021 3:47:00 AM

Oh yes, when we have kids we are busy and we should be! Cute!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/22/2021 2:25:00 PM

Thank you Kim! It was nonstop. I look back in amazement. God entrusted me with a lot of supernatural energy from heaven to keep up, that was for certain! They were so adorable.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/14/2021 4:48:00 AM

Though not triplets my three daughters were a handful. They gave me joy and gave my life meaning when life was tough going. God Bless, JB

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/15/2021 1:49:00 AM

Children give us a reason to keep on going when things get rough. They are the focal points to lift our gaze from life's battles and celebrate the joys of their precious lives. They are probably always a handful, but a heartful too!! Thank you for stopping by and all your kind words Judy <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2021 12:31:00 PM

Oh, it must be he reached the 35 entries mark then. (from what I am seeing written to you below here)

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/14/2021 1:39:00 AM

Thank you for reaching out to me on this Andrea, I'm really still pretty new on the soup, I haven't had enough time to really enjoy all the features and I appreciate the help I've had from you and Rama trying to figure this out!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/13/2021 7:45:00 PM

Ok, it's alright, I had fun reliving the memory as I wrote this <3 Memories, fun to visit, and I miss the tiny people they were, it made me rejoice in the memory anyhow. I also am glad they require a bit less of all the energy they required back then, so blessed breath of relief, ah!!! I can write again!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2021 12:30:00 PM

creative and charming. I wish some of the judges gave more wins in some of these contests!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/13/2021 7:46:00 PM

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it Andrea! It was a fun theme for a contest, I will look forward to the other poets stories!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/11/2021 12:05:00 AM

Why don't you soupmail Kai to increase the number of entries. It is an awesome take on theme?

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/11/2021 11:22:00 AM

Thanks for the suggestion, I soupmailed Kai. If the reason the contest is no longer available because of a lower entry number. Thank you for your awesome encouragement to my poem. I'm glad you like it :-)

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/10/2021 8:45:00 AM

Wow! What a creative entry for contest ( assuming it is for contest) All the best.

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/10/2021 4:40:00 PM

I had thought about sharing this is the contest, but I no longer see it listed. This was fun for me to write :-)

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/10/2021 3:32:00 PM

Thank you! It is a true story, they kept me sooo busy!!!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/10/2021 3:49:00 AM

I love this!! SO amazing. Love it. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/10/2021 3:31:00 PM

Thank you Gina! <3