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Interiors

I look under exteriors to gain a peek If you only, only, only, only knew the truth my mind instinctively seeks to know most completely about you I look at actions to understand what a heart is all about the total measure of a man to try to figure reasons out. I often wonder the how and why the purpose to my being. There is no truth that I must deny. When I look, I accept the seeing. I face a future like others, unknown yet try to set plans and goals. I can glance back and say I’ve grown having often crashed among the shoals. I look into the eyes to find a soul hoping that humanity is there but often there is darkness, dread and cold with a spirit that just doesn’t care. I look into the eyes and I see love hidden in the mindset of refusal private thoughts never spoken of lacking in the moments for proposal. I look at interiors more than a peek if you only, only, only, only, knew the truth my mind instinctively seeks to know most completely about you. 10/7/19 line from If You Only, Only, Only Knew revised to fit meter of line from your poem, Broken People "I look under exteriors to gain a peek," one extra "only" added. Pick a line any line Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux STRAND SELECT 12,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 10/12/2019 9:05:00 AM
One of my favourites, thanks for entering my contest. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 10/9/2019 1:10:00 PM
This is wonderfully expressed Janis. Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! xxoo
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Date: 10/9/2019 10:05:00 AM
Wonderful write Janice, glad this was rewarded with a top win!
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Date: 10/8/2019 4:12:00 PM
Many many congrats Janis, I especially love the impact of the repeated stanza:-) hugs Jan xx a
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Date: 10/8/2019 4:11:00 PM
Many many congrats Janis, I especially love the impact of the repeated stanza:-) hugs Jan xx a
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Date: 10/8/2019 11:09:00 AM
Loved this Janis. Congrats Lonna
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Date: 10/8/2019 7:40:00 AM
Wow. Powerfully, elegantly penned. Congratulations on your top win Janis! xomo
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