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Interchange

Skies fall, expect the weather change. Look-see the atmosphere when strange. Heads-up for fate’s rearrange. Don’t blink, hearken an abrupt change; For water’s deep…home on the range. Earth’s writhing in interchange.

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Date: 10/10/2024 5:12:00 PM
Flowed very well....you do very well. <3
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Date: 10/4/2024 5:13:00 AM
enjoyed the music and creativity, yann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2024 8:39:00 AM
Thank you, Yann!
Date: 10/2/2024 9:47:00 AM
Very creative poem dearest Kim, a fav for me.. this is wonderful
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/4/2024 8:39:00 AM
Thank you very much, Peonieslore!
Date: 10/2/2024 8:38:00 AM
There seems to be a lot of bad weather around. Still loved your monorhyme.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/2/2024 8:59:00 AM
We had that awful hurricane. It was devastating to some areas. Safe here.
Date: 10/1/2024 3:09:00 PM
This is deep. I look forward to the wild gales that will usher in the colder weather. Today, it's still a waiting game.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/1/2024 9:02:00 PM
I am looking forward to the cooler weather :)
Date: 10/1/2024 11:58:00 AM
Powerful words, Kim, woven into powerful imagery - "earth's writhing." So many are suffering right now. Thank you for this poem and for thinking about the victims of Helene. Sending you many blessings!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/1/2024 1:32:00 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Date: 10/1/2024 10:02:00 AM
Few words with much said. Water is powerful. I remember my dad opened the car door/water came out after a big storm. It is No fun.... Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/1/2024 10:04:00 AM
I feel for those impacted by the hurricane!

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