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Insomnia

the stillness of night waiting with breathless silence until the sunrise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/15/2024 4:59:00 PM
Dear talented soul, I enjoy reading poems written on subjects such as insomnia. And youv done an excellent job here! Capturing what insomnia is like, waiting till sunrise, in breathless silence. I think this is the first time iv read a senryu on insomnia. Powerful!! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 10/22/2019 5:46:00 PM
well, I suffer from insomnia but you managed to make it sound beautiful. FAVE
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Date: 9/12/2019 8:11:00 AM
It can make for a long night. Of course you will fall asleep about 15 minutes before the alarm goes off.
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Date: 8/2/2019 6:29:00 AM
I can relate to this a lot! It's one of those nights tonight. :)
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Date: 5/19/2019 10:44:00 PM
Must be very tough. Nicely done
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Date: 5/1/2019 10:55:00 AM
Oh excellent ink
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