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Insane Saturday Traffic

Traffic on a Saturday morning in the big city Insanity describes it well or really quite shitty There's mucho angst Everyone's a crank Each morning we need to take a loosen up pill

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2017 11:41:00 AM

So true my friend all in a hurry to get nowhere..

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/17/2017 11:50:00 AM

And usually succeed...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/17/2017 8:44:00 AM

T.O. Traffic is insane! Pills might help lol xomo Gooood morning Jack!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/17/2017 9:13:00 AM

And I live in Newmarket, 40 miles north of the big city!!!! xxx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/17/2017 8:16:00 AM

Indeed, I've no more power//to endure the daily rush hour//I plan my trips//for rush-hour skips//or else I get a bit sour. LOOSEN UP JACQUESAN!!! Are loosen up pills legal? ;-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/17/2017 9:15:00 AM

We have no breaks... well unless we shop at 10 minutes before closing!!!!! ARE THERE SUCH PILLS!!!