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canoe has its ribs A man's ribs facing upward In river and rain January 22, 2011 (c) Copyright 2011 Albert Geiser, All Rights Reserved,

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Date: 6/2/2016 1:23:00 AM
Albert, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT
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Date: 1/22/2011 2:48:00 PM
this made me think of a man dying all alone on the river. Did I get it right?
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Date: 1/22/2011 2:39:00 PM
Quite with variant meanings with good images, albert
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:21:00 AM
Nice...I like the images you are portraying Albert! GORGEOUS, Gorgeous Images!!! Christine PS: And its nice to read a Haiku with the proper amount of SYLLABLES!!! ~Smiles~
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