Inconsolable

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Written 1/19/25 for Bitesize #98 poetry contest sponsor Line Gauthier

Eyes shine like moon Envelopes like cocoon Face of teary monsoon Mourning loss of life Reeling difficult time Healing not in sight

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/19/2025 8:57:00 PM

First three lines move me -- Rocky Raccoon

Karen Jones
Date: 1/20/2025 4:07:00 AM

Thanks for reading Gershon!

John Read

Date: 1/19/2025 4:07:00 AM

Hi Karen, mourning the loss of life, is something we all have to deal with in our lives, all the best in the contest. xx

Karen Jones
Date: 1/19/2025 5:53:00 AM

Thanks John

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/19/2025 2:04:00 AM

Time heals all wounds. Never give up.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/19/2025 2:27:00 AM

Hugs Victor

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 1/19/2025 1:51:00 AM

Nice one Karen. Like how you use the rhymes in this bite size poem.

Karen Jones
Date: 1/19/2025 1:55:00 AM

Thank you kindly Oliver!