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In the Invisibility

whereas I, by chance, talking to myself, finding myself alone, enclosed by four walls and a door, knock to see, in the invisibility, with x-ray ability, not held, if you dear reader, sitting by your nightlight, might switch it on and find a word to speak silently or out loud; your choice. the ones you borrow from a native tongue, feeling their incomprehensible weight, stopping mid-sentence, to ponder if you are moved in the slightest bit; I’m biting my lip in anticipation, though I’ve no inkling that you're mulling over my thoughts, my doubts, my innards, my all. now, I, think of you, sitting by a scintilla of light, moonlight marvels at the roundness of your lips as you nearly sing your “o’s;” sonnets seem sensual alongside the bed, though always grieving. love is a dog, a walk in the woods, a lark. leave me be. let me remember you as I long to. don’t say goodbye, but leave my sighs on the table, where you first met me, and I almost met you, and you, dear reader, take back up with me, though now there’s a familiarity between us, lost in the shadows, amidst the stars and you can nearly hear me breathing.

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Date: 1/26/2025 1:52:00 PM
The last three lines to this touching poem encapsulates all the ideas mentioned in the first five stanzas. It's as perfect an ending to any of your poems I have ever read. Bravo! / Maurice.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2025 11:02:00 AM
Wow! Thank you so much, Maurice!
Date: 1/24/2025 6:02:00 AM
Hello Kim, this is a beautiful write. Four walls and a door, that type of peace and silence sets the soul free to wander. I enjoyed the read. Have a wonderful day and a great weekend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2025 11:03:00 AM
It does, doesn’t it?! Thank you, Zyrool!
Date: 1/22/2025 9:31:00 PM
The peace of solitude can bring focus and the past to ponder and reflect ignighting past flames that were once experienced. Lovely write Kim, thank you for sharing. Hugs...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2025 11:04:00 AM
Thank you for a lovely comment, Mike!
Date: 1/22/2025 5:52:00 AM
Like a raw diamond that is awaiting the expert eye and hand to cut and fashion the facets, so your poem reveals startling light in its depths to the reader. I enjoyed reading this, Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2025 1:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Suzette! I appreciate you! Hugs
Date: 1/22/2025 4:11:00 AM
Creative one with much descriptiveness and imagination. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2025 4:47:00 AM
Thank you, Sara! :)
Date: 1/22/2025 12:03:00 AM
it is so good to be familiar with the reader, not walking alone, and writing with talent, enjoyed your poem dear poet
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2025 4:47:00 AM
Thank you, Yann!
Date: 1/21/2025 8:16:00 PM
This is a poem of a unique kind, quite profound too. Sometimes, sitting in my room surrounded by four walls, especially at night, I too have such strange and similar thoughts. I am able to visualize the images of those who I have never met, but feel familiar through poems and words written and spoken. As a reader, I feel the power of your words and feel close to you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2025 9:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa! <3
Date: 1/21/2025 7:20:00 PM
How could you ever be alone? This is an intense piece, one " familiarity" where I'm learning more about your world, and as much love as it can go, here, from your faithful reader, <3
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Paige Hind
Date: 1/21/2025 7:20:00 PM
It's such raw and powerful talent! :)

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