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In A World Where I Do Not Exist

there's this a world in which I do not exist but my pulse a reality that invites trance all that may pour from my veins creates lanes snaps of synapse ease from stress to slow if you go with my flow breath is ethereally engaged in opposite of rage I'm sedative for soul just roll with the thump, thump, thump of my heart beating though I'm not there to care, I entreat some common goal that you or I was told and if I'm absent, I don't see it through but all of me senses all of you whilst tingles and touch are too much as you or I are missing on separate planes playing the same games but empty of vessels that time permits travellers I know that you know there will be a next time around to coincide, together, above ground our forevers are intertwined as signs suggest neither you, not I, can never not exist

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Date: 9/9/2024 12:25:00 PM
So clever with rhyme and timing... love this xo
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Date: 9/9/2024 2:40:00 PM
Ooh thank you. I just reread it and I quite like my jumbly rhymes now you've pointed them out :)
Date: 9/7/2024 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Love your line, "time permits travellers." Last night on TV, they were talking about this. They say yes. Guess it could be both good/bad. Have a blessed/fun day with your win......................
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Date: 9/8/2024 12:16:00 PM
Haha interesting! Thanks Paula x
Date: 9/7/2024 10:00:00 AM
Heya Dilly, I thought I’d already commented on this one, I definitely read it before, and remember some of the great lines here, yes we do need our vessels to experience time, which leads to the inevitable conclusion from time’s perspective we can never not exist, a beautiful poem congratulations on high placement in contest, cheers David
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Date: 9/8/2024 12:15:00 PM
Thanks David, I'm sure vessels will get a bit outdated in the future. Maybe we'll all live in that split second of a dream that feels like a full story.
Date: 9/7/2024 7:57:00 AM
I like how your formatted this one.. if only time did permit travellers... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/7/2024 8:01:00 AM
Many thanks
Date: 8/28/2024 9:02:00 AM
I love the flow of your piece! I feel I could sink into it it’s so smooth. Very enjoyable reading!
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Date: 8/28/2024 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, glad you liked it. It was a fun one to write

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