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you owe me an apology you owe me better you owe me promises and dreams you owe me the sun and the moon you owe me better i haven't given up on us but i'm holding out for better posted on July 26, 2024

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Joe Maverick

Date: 8/13/2024 9:53:00 AM

Yet truly Line..' Does it have to be to the letter.? Enjoyed the read and thought.'

Mike Bayles

Date: 8/2/2024 7:25:00 AM

I like the feelings conveyed by the speaker of the poem, a touch of anger. There is a good sense of bargaining and pleading.

Gary Radice

Date: 7/27/2024 2:22:00 AM

I like your poem’s ambiguity; are you directing your words to a person who has perhaps wronged you in a relationship or indeed life itself? Great to read you back at The Soup Line. The tureen has leaked much talent recently. Cheers - Gary

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/26/2024 8:22:00 PM

The complexity of relationships, lovely poem :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2024 3:42:00 PM

there can be so many expectations also conflict in a relationship - a poem many can relate to Line - have missed seeing you around but many regulars are missing now:-( hugs jan xx