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they warned me against extremes intensity must not be indulged "Flying in between is your safety scene not too high not too low don't look too longingly below don't fly too close to the sea of his splendor the blue green of his eyes hypnotize, mesmerize desire will dampen your wings weighing you down nor must you fly too close to his passion blazing bountiful in brilliance his sensuality, a searing sun will melt your wings; you'll come undone." I should have listened I should have known Icarus ignited was I My hubris lifted my higher nothing seemed dire overconfident in my ability to fly away if need be... your sensuality seduced me drew me closer and closer solar combustion on display you would have your way rays of radiant heat in wave upon wave emanated towards me doused in desire you set on fire melting melting melting burning turning twisting writhing rigorously pain and pleasure came upon waves together spiraling me out of control seared straight to my soul I fell Oh, how I fell from the apex into the swell of the blue green sea of your eyes sizzling fire subsiding subsiding awash in wetness about to die you hear me cry: "I would do it again and again and again today and any day molten passion in my core consuming, always wanting more I know you'd have me fly again... Icarus ignited right up to your sky." Eileen Manassian "In Greek mythology, Icarus is the son of the master craftsman Daedalus, the creator of the Labyrinth. Often depicted in art, Icarus and his father attempt to escape from Crete by means of wings that his father constructed from feathers and wax. Icarus' father warns him first of complacency and then of hubris, asking that he fly neither too low nor too high, so the sea's dampness would not clog his wings or the sun's heat melt them. Icarus ignored his father's instructions not to fly too close to the sun, when the wax in his wings melted and he fell into the sea." Wikipedia

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Date: 11/10/2016 3:42:00 PM
Despite all warnings it is hard to resist the attraction of love and passion. Temptation is like a magnet and very often it is hard to escape its pull, even if eventually we have to suffer its consequences. This is such a lovely poem, Eileen; it deserves reading more than once. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/6/2016 1:29:00 AM
Desire is the flame to these fragile moths we call our hearts, Eileen. A terrific write, love it. Viv x
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:36:00 PM
I absolutely love the story of Icarus, and this poem is superb, Eileen. Well done!!! You've made this very well your own, in your passionate, longing way. I love the "melting melting" stanza...it is so intense. My favorite line: "from the apex into the swell of the blue green sea of your eyes" That is so brilliant. Adding to my favorites. : D Always, Laura
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Date: 11/1/2016 7:28:00 PM
You certainly brought the heat with this one Eileen. Ooh la la all the way!!! I am a fan of Greek Mythology.
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Date: 10/31/2016 9:43:00 AM
The heat of passion, hot enough to melt anyone's imagination, Eileen. Feel the burn!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/31/2016 11:51:00 AM
I do....I feel the burn always. Thanks for this lovely visit, Daniel. Hugs
Date: 10/31/2016 5:46:00 AM
Another great poem Eileen. Wonderful!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/31/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Rick. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/31/2016 1:04:00 AM
Eileen, wow...this is a stunner! You have conveyed the depth of love's passion by using the plight of Icarus. I loved it! 7 ; )
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/31/2016 3:16:00 AM
Thanks, dear Connie. So kind of you to visit me today. Hope all is well. That seven from you is much appreciated, dear. Hugs
Date: 10/30/2016 11:34:00 PM
I so love Icarus legend...but mostly love how it inspired you to write such a wonderful poem.Dear Eileen. To be consumed by passionate flames...and anybody would dare.risk it again...Awesome.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/31/2016 3:18:00 AM
Thanks, my sweet sister. I've always loved the story as well. We sometimes long to escape, as did Icarus....only to find...the intensity too much to handle. Love having you visit, dear. Hugs
Date: 10/30/2016 9:50:00 PM
Hi Eileen, I agree with Arthur, you have crafted a good poem from Greek Mythology. Well done. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/31/2016 3:21:00 AM
Thanks, dear. I love having you visit me. Hugs. Will be by to visit you soon.
Date: 10/30/2016 8:34:00 PM
Oh what a poem you have weaved from this ancient lore, loved it! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/31/2016 3:25:00 AM
:) I'm so pleased that you loved it, dear... :)
Date: 10/30/2016 8:34:00 PM
Its funny because today I was reading poems of Sopphos!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/31/2016 3:25:00 AM
What a coincidence!!! Strange....

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