I Would Hug You
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Written, April 16, 2025
For The Contest, “Write Twelve Beautiful Lines.”
Sponsor, Constance La France
RONDINE Form - not listed on PS
Form 12 lines, 7 and 5 line Stanzas
abbabb refrain abba refrain
Refrain (first 4 words of line 1)
“Love 'tween all creatures can be felt;
their hearts, like ours, can warm and melt.”
_by Poet
I would hug you, if you'd let me;
you stare at me with loving eyes
and watch me spread a snack surprise!
You now come closer, and I see
perhaps your trust will someday be
much stronger than you may surmise-
I would hug you!
A bond exists, to some degree-
your body language now implies.
Oh, gentle Deer, please analyze-
if you could walk to me with glee-
I would hug you!
Copyright © Sandra Haight | Year Posted 2025
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