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I miss you Beach

I miss you Beach touch of your warm sand beneath my feet squishing between my toes I miss your sandy salty kiss up on my lips the whisper of the ocean collector of its treasures you save a special seat on the beach for me to watch the waves roll in till they reach my feet teasing me with its coldness I miss you like the seashells on my shelf miss the ocean they long to reconnect become one once again I miss you Beach so far apart we are you are forever on my mind and in my heart

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2024 3:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K

Karen Croft
Date: 8/11/2024 5:52:00 AM

Thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/8/2024 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your "I Miss you Beach" write. I love the beach but none close by. Oh yes, forever on my mind/my heart ...... Have a fun day............

Karen Croft
Date: 8/8/2024 3:03:00 PM

Thanks for reading, have a great night!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 8/8/2024 6:53:00 AM

so very nice, dear poet friend.

Karen Croft
Date: 8/8/2024 8:05:00 AM

Thank you for reading!

Ink Empress

Date: 8/8/2024 6:40:00 AM

Dear karen, i feel for you so very strongly: i remember in comments you did mention you havent been feeling well and i can understand why that would make you miss the beach the ocean and being in places where you feel free and find serenity. Iv seen my sister there. So i understand. I really love the line “ I miss you like the seashells on my shelf miss the ocean ” awwn this is a fave for me! Congratulations on your win and thank you for sharing this

Karen Croft
Date: 8/8/2024 8:05:00 AM

Thank you dear poet for your kind words. We all struggles in life and have that special place that wipes them away!