I Miss

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Contest: I Miss

I should have when I could have but did not, In retrospect I missed a chance or two. I see it now! If only then I knew - I would have given life a better shot! But who has time to waste on reminisce? Past's desiccated dust settled by Now, Long overdue wholehearted weary vow - Time in and of itself one should not miss.

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Gary Radice

Date: 9/3/2024 11:04:00 PM

Your poem is excellent but I particularly love that opening line of yours. Sometimes I can read a poem and its first line doesn't draw me in. That certainly isn't the case here. Thanks for sharing. Cheers - Gary

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/11/2024 3:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/8/2024 2:08:00 PM

Hello Margarita :-) Very nice poem. Congratulations on your win, have a nice day ~ AA

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/8/2024 12:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "I Miss" write. Time/life goes by so fast. Never look back.... Have a fun day............

Ink Empress

Date: 8/8/2024 6:38:00 AM

Very well written and expressed, sometimes there isnt even enough time to miss what we had and loved and chances we could have taken. Wise take on the theme. Pleasure reading this, congratulations on your win