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Dear me, I breathe you in the pulse of erased promises ~ I'm a shadow in your space and not any voice which can be heard above restless mists, so, when the crystals of change mock us ~ and I am a secret siren searing in smoked lace, sequined with lavender sparkles, my soul shall build an ethereal kayak from cantaloupe pulp ~ and sail beyond those rhyming reefs, whose refrains once abandoned the salty syllables, raining in rhapsody... When the north star kisses the sea, and the sun is saintly blanketed in grape-glittered gales, my history hisses beneath unforgiving waves ~ where grief remains adorned with the glistening tears of vanilla planktons ~ and I am enchanted by those tidal teals, gently caressing the gulfs of my heart. Wearing the ocean as a clairvoyant cape, rivulets ribboned upon my wrists ~ I keep rising above revolting rainbows, whose volatile vows were engraved within my necklace of sepia-stained seashells, each skin stoned ~ with the initials of a storm raging within me... as those astronomy clusters confuse my crystal-clear conscience, I wander within invisible intuitions, condensed in milk-quartz meraki, beckoning to quench my unreasonable questionings ~ "...have the villains of valorous victims, always remembered my poetic fingertips as ferric brushstrokes, tracing the brokenness of a bitter-bronze mannequin ~ who has forgotten the perfumed ivories of those cherishing cherubs, fluttering in her frost-sealed feathers...?" Inhaling those magnanimous mantras muted by the megalomaniac moon ~ where your herbs are seasoned with the deceased breeze of happiness, I have become a mirrorless face ~ as these inescapable energies cannot chain my intentions, by hiding the coconut canoes of purity, beneath turquoise jewels of tulip-marines... So, pardon me ~ if I couldn't be the daughter of your snake-sunrise, trading myself for the tunes of your selfish silence... "O' sweet seeds of life, I'll sow you ~ watering your visions, armouring aquamarines from wistful weeds ~ where your roots can reep a halo of hope... sequined upon kohl strings, tied in the harp of heaven ~ I'll still paint the florets with specks of gold and cherry, for, there must be a kismet in the paradise of patience, waiting for me to unfurl a whimsical watermelon lustre ~ drizzling dewdrops of affection and glory, in this land that lacks empathy..."

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Date: 12/9/2024 9:53:00 PM
Dear Hiya, great poet friend, I am proud to share this site with poets of your calibre. I feel that you can speak only in metaphors.....so deep and engrossing, every metaphor opening a doorway to a new perspective. They evoke feelings of sadness over neglect and misunderstanding. They resonate deep into every reader. The way you have woven together imagery from nature is breathtaking. I have to swim oceans to reach you. Within you, billows of thoughts rise and fall. You are so right. Our world lacks empathy, yet there 's a halo of hope. "I'll still paint the florets with specks of gold and cherry, for, there must be a kismet in the paradise of patience, waiting for me to unfurl a whimsical watermelon lustre". Beautiful conclusion to a wonderful poem. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 12/9/2024 12:38:00 PM
Hiya, as I read this I am thinking how much activity is going on inside of you. Some of it seems to reflect some hurt and lack of acceptance that perhaps applies to many of us and especially to women in some cultures (this land that lacks empathy). You have a very powerful and expressive style that takes time for me to absorb, but I do like thinking about the metaphors you use and what you are communicating on a very basic level but in a very picturesque manner. I hope you find and express all your inner strength and beauty. This is certainly a way to do so. It's a pleasure to have an insight into the way you think, which is so different from how I am. I can respect you and what you do as it says a lot. Smiles!!
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Date: 11/29/2024 1:52:00 AM
Dear Hiya, this is just beyond impeccable, and impressive, as you speak in metaphors that resonate and speaks to my soul, you write in a way that always makes it easier for me to comprehend as my brain is wired in such a way which only few can understand and you are one of them. Theres so many emotions in this and i felt like you wrote this without trying too hard, just effortlessly, letting your emotions do the writing, and thats what captured my mind and eyes, as i like to feel what i read, from metaphors to alliterations to everything else in this makes this worthy of a first place and if must point out what hit the strongest~
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Date: 11/29/2024 1:54:00 AM
I absolutely loved “ So, pardon me ~ if I couldn't be the daughter of your snake-sunrise, trading myself for the tunes of your selfish silence...” gosh! Those words , speak for me! And i love it! This is a fave for me and the way youv used nature to depict innermost emotions and struggles of life as you breathe life, is just soul hitting! Thank you for writing and for sharing! Pleasure reading this
Date: 11/27/2024 8:42:00 AM
Your metaphors, emotions and imagery are of the highest degree, making you one of the best writers on the soup. You describe your journey from down feelings to elation. Wonderful.
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Date: 11/27/2024 6:53:00 AM
- Your use of metaphors always impresses me... what a poem, Hiya ... wow - Developing empathy is perhaps the most significant effort we can make when it comes to improving ourselves :) - hugs
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Date: 11/26/2024 3:10:00 AM
Great metaphors. Poem shows differences in people. Some are more giving than others. I like the strength of I. It was enchanting.
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Date: 11/25/2024 1:48:00 PM
This has an interesting take. I think you're talking to yourself, another audience, and us- anyway, could be wrong....but your metaphors, on point, as always...<3
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Date: 11/20/2024 10:37:00 AM
Wow, a nice poem. Full of metaphors and imagery.
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Date: 11/20/2024 6:04:00 AM
Hey Hiya. Colorful, full of metaphors and descriptors. Inky will no doubt be impressed with your entry. We do live in a world that increasingly lacks empathy. So sad
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