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I Am An Open Book

You are like my morning coffee without you I cannot start my day... You are like the chorus of my favorite song without you the song would be incomplete... Your simple hello brings serenity to an otherwise chaotic day... You broke down the walls I’ve build, no one else has come this close... You know my thoughts my every mood, in fact you know me... To you I am an open book so tell me, why do you always need surety? Why the insecurity?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2011 11:25:00 PM

This is a very honest and REAL poem. I love it. I am like this too!

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 6/19/2010 1:27:00 PM

we all need to hear that we matter from time to time. we know it, we just need to hear it. i enjoyed your poem.

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 6/19/2010 12:53:00 PM

I know, its a guy thing. If it were not for insecurity, dare we take the plunge? It is the mechanism by which the brain of man lends cause to making those important decisions. It is that protective state that insures stability. I love poetry that grabs me and gives me pause. You succeeded nicely.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2010 12:39:00 PM

love it, enjoyed your write..P.D.