Humpty Dumpty

"Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall, Humpty Dumpty had a great fall, All the kings horses and all the kings men, couldn't put humpty together again."
They called him an egg, for he was round and glee, They laughed at his nose so very big and ugly. They called him names, Humpty Dumpty was sad They threw rotten eggs and it made Humpty mad. His mother would comfort she said he was unique Don't mind those kids, Don't care what they think You are meant to be Much more that your look A rush of confidence is all that it took Humpty Dumpty got smart the smartest of them all Up on his high horse he would never fall He accomplished a lot as he rode to the top his super ego charged, it would never stop He ruled over the land with strong fists and war He took from the good and from the bad he took more Humpty Dumpty terrible king He in fact was very mean Mother came to him one day "you're the worst I've seen" Her visit made him sad regret spread across his face He climbed his castle wall and gazed over his ruling place He took a breath full of despair he was rotten to the core His ego landed and down he fell, shattered forever more. All the kings men gathered to see Humpty Dumpty crying loud He had yolk on his face oh this egghead was not proud He renounced his leadership and started a chicken farm He stayed away from others so he would never cause harm But he could hear them laughing he was scrambled inside It boiled him deeply until the day he was fried. Date: 6/30 for contest Humpty dumpty
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Date: 11/2/2019 11:06:00 AM
This is so so good Casarah. It should be turned into a childrens book. This is sunny side up terrific. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/8/2018 7:21:00 AM
Amazingly well constructed piece worthy of a win. Congratulations. Faux
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:15:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/7/2018 10:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Creative and well written. Enjoyed this so much!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2018 6:15:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/7/2018 9:31:00 AM
Hi Casarah, You wrote a good piece for the contest theme. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2018 6:15:00 AM
Thank you alexis :)
Date: 7/7/2018 7:59:00 AM
Gladly in the end humpty realized his mistake, many congratulations on your 1st position in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:15:00 AM
Thank you for hosting an inspiring contest Faraz, this was fun to write for.
Date: 7/1/2018 8:56:00 AM
It is sad how things that happen when you are young can fester inside and turn you written.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2018 6:14:00 AM
judge not a man by his shell, but what yolk lies inside. -I'm sure that is a proverb or something lol
Date: 7/1/2018 3:38:00 AM
what a fabulous story and I love the humourous puns - you didn't chicken out with this one Cas it's eggcellent:-) hugs Jan xx
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2018 6:13:00 AM
Egg-actly what I was going for lol
Date: 6/30/2018 9:49:00 PM
A most entertaining read, Cas.
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2018 6:13:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 6/30/2018 9:25:00 PM
Oh I love this Cas, so well written and even I can see reading this is a bed time story!!
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:12:00 AM
I guess I read too many bed time stories lol it came almost too easy
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