Humanity

HUMANITY Humanity, do we believe in you? Can we find the divine Underneath the newborn flesh? The coat of many colors - Mankind manifested by God’s breath, begins so sweet. Ailing from the sin of disobedience, an array of nails - rusted Nubs on hands and feet. Christ transposed it all. The Innocent lamb - his humanity pleading, teardrops bleeding, Tethered to His love for all - helpless & hopeless humanity. Yes, i believe! In humanity’s salvation - the rainbow’s haloed grace. 11/14/2017 Contest: Humanity Acrostic/John Hamilton

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John Michaels

Date: 11/25/2017 7:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Kim!! Kind regards, John.

Sandra Haight

Date: 11/18/2017 7:15:00 PM

Well-written, Kim. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/19/2017 6:07:00 AM

Thank you, Sandra! <3

John Hamilton

Date: 11/18/2017 11:31:00 AM

Super write Kim, congrats on a fine win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:01:00 PM

Thanks John!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/18/2017 4:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win, Kim - blessings to you, friend, and keep on writing! This is wonderful! :-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:01:00 PM

Thanks so much, Greg! <3

Lewis Raynes

Date: 11/15/2017 6:11:00 PM

wow, this is such a bang on poem Kim, great stuff. "The innocent lamb" is so fitting

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:02:00 PM

Thank you Lewis! <3

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/15/2017 12:33:00 PM

Enjoyed this magnificent poem, Kim. Good luck to both of us in the contest!;-)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2017 4:02:00 PM

Thank you Edward!

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/14/2017 10:36:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem. Good luck with the contest, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2017 1:25:00 PM

Thank you Line!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/14/2017 7:30:00 AM

Hi Kim our takes on the theme couldn't be more different! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2017 7:31:00 AM

But that is what makes it so great! <3 Kim

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/14/2017 6:58:00 AM

I LOVE THIS!! You have written such a pleasurable write my friend, there's more truth within this poem than I have read in many many poems! You have written such a magnificent piece, I really enjoyed reading it this morning! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2017 7:02:00 AM

Thanks so much Russell! <3 Kim

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/14/2017 6:48:00 AM

A potent discourse on humanity--well written, Kim--best for a win!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2017 7:02:00 AM

Thanks so much Vijay! <3