Hug Me

Hug me my passion For this night may not revert This moonlit night This blossom, this spring May not last for ever

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 3/16/2013 8:40:00 AM

embrace what you have! very true, enjoyed this so much.

Dave Timperley

Date: 2/11/2013 1:56:00 AM

The man or woman who doesn't need a hug, doesn't live. Great read Muhammad. God Bless. Dave.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 3/17/2013 2:17:00 PM

Thanks for visiting my poem and your kind comments.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/10/2013 5:33:00 AM

A very nice tanka. So true - Spring will not last forever. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/11/2013 12:08:00 PM

Thanks for admiring my Tanka, Lucilla. I am so glad

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/6/2013 9:13:00 PM

A passion's hug...love the imagery, Mohammad! Beautiful Tanka. Love, Annalise

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/9/2013 12:04:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by Annalise. I am so pleased you like my Tanka

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2013 7:34:00 PM

Mohammad, a nice poem and want... i wish one could offer a hug... hope you got the hug, at the moment ...seems perfect to me... enjoyed...LINDA

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/9/2013 11:51:00 AM

Thanks PD. I am still waiting for that hug. Thanks for your sympathy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2013 3:13:00 PM

very romantic. so nice, Mohammad.

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/9/2013 11:38:00 AM

I am glad you like my Tanka, Andrea. Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2013 11:48:00 AM

Sending you a gigantic hug for your beautiful poem and for being my friend. - Hope flu is gone now, and you're healthy. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/8/2013 9:57:00 AM

Thanks for your loving comments. The Flu is gone, I am in perfect health. Thanks for your concern. Love

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/6/2013 11:32:00 AM

So true and so good Mohammad xx

Mohammad Yamin
Date: 2/7/2013 11:17:00 AM

Thanks for visiting my Tanka and for your kind words