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nicknames for three kids Perky Pink, Road Runner and Sailor Girl. in blink of eye, gone and forgotten will they even remember how first i saw them in hawaiian paradise personalities between Pearl Harbor sailing and home life with pen in hand a real pen not much time to let ink imagine with work and salutes pretty and cute and active might kids care to find the scrawls of my heart and penmanship less shaky would the nuns be proud in true days of motherhood hug poems for my trio

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Date: 12/15/2024 12:36:00 PM
Such an interesting inspiration to write. Congrats here, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/15/2024 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 12/14/2024 3:21:00 PM
This is so true to your self and interesting, enjoyed reading it :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2024 7:41:00 PM
Glad you found it interesting! Had fun reminiscing! xx
Date: 12/12/2024 3:07:00 PM
Our children are our life and they inspire us to be creative and thoughtful and I think they surely inspired you to write Kim. You have to thank them for doing so. God bless them you and I wish you a warm and joyful Christmas to you and all your babies...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2024 7:43:00 PM
Merry Christmas to you and yours Mike! Thank you!
Date: 12/10/2024 12:08:00 AM
So you are the proud mother of three kids.... two boys and a girl, I suppose. They are your inspiration. Hope they read your poems and enjoy.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2024 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa! xx
Date: 12/9/2024 11:49:00 AM
Wonderful piece. Nice take on the creative process. Conveys emotions.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 3:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Frank!
Date: 12/9/2024 10:37:00 AM
Lovely mother & kids!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 10:46:00 AM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Date: 12/9/2024 8:08:00 AM
- A lovely birth for your first poem, Kim :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 9:47:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)
Date: 12/9/2024 8:02:00 AM
It's amazes me how we can all remember the spark that set us off on our poetic journeys. Nothing better than your kids to inspire you Good luck in the contest Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 9:47:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Tom!

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