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Hopelessly In Love

My love, you saunter in my heart of golden sand touching the waves of heaven that ebb and band emerald in the balm teasing light on my palm of my hand. With a breath beneath the sun and sky my soul you command.
2/13/2018

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Date: 2/18/2018 3:02:00 PM
Wonderful, Eve. I particularly loved the last line. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/18/2018 10:18:00 AM
Oh yes, your poems suck  im so kidding, they are lovely  (:
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Date: 2/18/2018 10:25:00 AM
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Date: 2/15/2018 6:30:00 PM
very very poetic, Eve!! Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 2/15/2018 10:43:00 AM
Wow, Nelly and whoa, Nelly- another sensually driven romantic ew la la poem. Is it hot in here? I loved it! Be blessed ... CayCay
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Date: 2/15/2018 9:26:00 AM
Eve, after I read this you deserved your placement. Great job.
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:23:00 PM
Hi Eve, These four lines are just beautiful. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/14/2018 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations Eve Regards Tom
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Date: 2/14/2018 12:07:00 PM
- Congratulations Eve, a beautiful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/14/2018 11:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win.Your poem is very romantic for sure.
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Date: 2/14/2018 9:01:00 AM
So beautiful Eve.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Date: 2/14/2018 7:24:00 AM
Awesome 4-liner. Beautiful, Eve.
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:54:00 AM
Soothing love...I like it...Happy Valentine's day to you and yours
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Date: 2/14/2018 12:45:00 AM
Cupid has been very busy on here, another great four line romantic verse. Good luck in the contest Eve. Regards Tom
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Date: 2/14/2018 12:16:00 AM
Lovely imagery Eve... Great lines... Good luck in the contest...
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