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Holy Teardrops Bat Man Slipping through an alley I never even had a plan. The first time that I saw him. The one they call Bat Man. Standing in the shadows he stirred up all my fears. With that creepy stare of his and those two pointed ears. I asked does he leap tall buildings? I said I am a fan. He told me that I'm confused that he's not Super Man. I told him I was sorry as I stumbled for my lighter. Nervously I smiled at him do you climb walls like a spider? He said no and looked away Bat Man is my name! Oh I said without a care he looked away in shame. How is it then that you fight crime you can't climb and there's no flying? He drove off in his Bat Mobile and I saw Bat Man crying. May 16th 20015

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Date: 6/7/2015 8:36:00 AM
I been thinking...You need to change this to Bacon Man
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 10:14:00 AM
LOL Okay then! :)
Date: 6/6/2015 11:08:00 PM
Edwin, Congratulations on your Comic Book Characters win. Have a good one. SKAT
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 6:18:00 AM
Thank you SKAT! God bless!
Date: 6/5/2015 2:24:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Edwin - Batman sure was a popular theme:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 6:18:00 AM
Thank you Jan!!! <3
Date: 6/5/2015 8:05:00 AM
unusual take Edwin expertly written congrats on placing hugs
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 6:19:00 AM
Thank you Shadow!!! :) God bless!
Date: 6/5/2015 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 6/7/2015 6:20:00 AM
Thank you dear Judy!! <3
Date: 5/18/2015 1:02:00 AM
Edwin, I enjoyed the poem, thanks for sharing. Luv SKAT
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/21/2015 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Skat!! It was a fun write! Hope you have a great weekend! Ed.
Date: 5/17/2015 10:15:00 AM
Bam....pow......excellent Ed
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/21/2015 1:15:00 PM
LOL Thank you Tim! Ah the good old days :) God bless you brother. Ed
Date: 5/17/2015 9:26:00 AM
Sometimes it's so confusing. Who's the most powerful of them all? Batman, superman or spiderman? Wonderful write full of humor....7
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/21/2015 1:17:00 PM
Well Batman wins hands down on his outfits for me lol Thank you for saying hi and for the 7. God bless.
Date: 5/17/2015 8:44:00 AM
The title is brilliant the poem is very humourous - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/21/2015 1:18:00 PM
I'll have to make it up to Batman in another poem down the road LOL. <3

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